I have to say this started out sort of two-star-y, with what felt again like too much exposition of a magic system that doesn’t really make sense and stakes that seem hard to place. Side bar, the magic continues to not make sense to me, as it does not follow Sanderson’s Second Law of limitations being more important than powers–night magic and light weave can just be created into anything, a la the Green Lantern(?), as long as you are sufficiently concentrated and have worked […]
still confusing, but promising
A Monsoon Rising by Thea Guanzon














